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Drowning in Rain
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My mood is the rain
Drizzling on down
Drop by tiny drop
Tears down my cheeks
Whispering of sadness
But never staying long
To heal the sorrow I feel
My mood is the clouds
Darkening the sky
And hiding the sun
Empty promises like
An empty soul
Dark and dreary
Just how I feel
My mood is the wind
Screaming through the trees
Never lingering, never comforting
A hollow thought
A lingering voice
Whipping the world
And leaving nothing behind
When I'm this empty
Nothing can save me
I should be happy
I have what I wanted
And yet nothing at all
I'm begging for a savior
I want to believe
How can everything feel
Like I'm drowning in rain?
Drizzling on down
Drop by tiny drop
Tears down my cheeks
Whispering of sadness
But never staying long
To heal the sorrow I feel
My mood is the clouds
Darkening the sky
And hiding the sun
Empty promises like
An empty soul
Dark and dreary
Just how I feel
My mood is the wind
Screaming through the trees
Never lingering, never comforting
A hollow thought
A lingering voice
Whipping the world
And leaving nothing behind
When I'm this empty
Nothing can save me
I should be happy
I have what I wanted
And yet nothing at all
I'm begging for a savior
I want to believe
How can everything feel
Like I'm drowning in rain?
I wrote this poem last week when it rained every day and half of my friends were out of the country. No, I don't feel this way all the time. And I know I'm not a poet. But it was honestly how I felt, so I've decided to post it. Take of this what you will. I'll probably end up editing it later when I feel like it.
© 2011 - 2024 Ivy-Greene
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I just remembered that I wanted to reread this, so I did. It's still perfecto. 